考研英语写作

简单句的满分表达：

被动

1、我们应该孝敬父母。
 Parents should be respected by us.

• Should的替换：
  • ought to/be supposed to/be obliged to
• We的替换(单词越准确越好)：
  • the public/private
  • individuals/the folk(普通大众)
  • Youngsters and teenagers/Parents/Experts and professors/All children and adults
  • All men and women in all walks/fans

2、我们不应该盲目追星。
 Superstars should not be pursued blindly by youngsters and teenagers.

• Not的替换：
  • Never/seldom/by no means/fail to

3、污染很严重。
 Pollution is thought very serious by more and more children and adults.

• Think的替换：
  • hold/argue/contend/assume/presume
  • insist/maintain/assert/claim
  • Be of the opinion that/have been convinced that/cling to the perspective that
• Very的替换：
  • pretty/quite/rather
  • Distinctly/outstandingly/remarkably/exceedingly
  • especially/extraordinarily/enormously
• Serious的替换:
  • Grave/severe/fearful
  • Be of great severity
• More and more的替换：
  • An increasing amount of/increasingly/growingly

4、自信很重要。
 Confidence is claimed exceedingly important by an increasing amount of experts and professors.

• Important的替换：
  • vital/essential/significant/crucial/critical/indispensable
  • Be of great significance/play a key role in sth

$被动句型推荐写在第一段的最后一句话引出文章中心的时候使用$

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There be句型

• Be的替换：
  • look/seem/feel/taste/appear/become/keep/remain/get/prove

 $Be构成现在进行时不能替换。$

 There proves many reasons explaining the phenomenon.

• Many的替换：
  • a sea of/a host of/a multitude of/a train of/Immense amounts of/Numerous
• Reasons的替换：
  • Causes/factors/elements
• Explain的替换：
  • account for/lead to/give rise to/contribute to/be responsible for
• Phenomenon的替换：
  • problem/issue/current situation

 $本句型可以作为第二段第一句话作为总起句使用（分析原因）。$

• There is little doubt that…/There are those who claim that…
• There is strong evidence to show that…
• There is a growing worldwide awareness around the world that…

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比较结构

1、as…as
As + adj/adv + as + 比较对象，句末加一个which引导的非限制性定位从句，对前面的名词进行补充说明。

• Liu keeps as graceful as a red rose, which can take away the breath of a sea of men.
• Confidence/English/… becomes as crucial as air and water, which is playing an indispensable role in our daily life.
• Pollution is as serious as earthquakes, which can threaten natives health or even take their lives away.

$本句型推荐写在第一段最后一句话引出文章中心，第三段第一句话总结的时候使用$
$(只要作文中出现形容词或副词的地方都可以写成as\dots as)。$

2、the adj/adv(比较级)+句子…the adj/adv(比较级)+句子
（第一个句子用一般现在时，第二个句子一般将来时）

• The higher one climb, the farther he will look.
• The more hardworking all children and adults keep, the luckier they will become.
• The more confidence all men and women in all walks have, the more easily they will gain success.
• The more time students spend in pursuing stars, the less time they will use on study.
• The faster measures are taken, the more effectively the problem will be solved

$应该注意是形容词还是副词的比较级。本句型写在作文的第二段分析原因的时候使用，也可以写在第三段的最后一句话喊口号的时候使用。$

• Adopt action/steps = take measures
• Resolve/settle/handle/deal with/cope with

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并列句的满分表达：

1、常见的连词：

• And的替换：
  • Likewise/similarly/equally
  • At the same time/in the meanwhile
• But的替换：
  • Conversely/by contrast/Unexpectedly

 I love the one but he fails to love me.
 I love the one. Unexpectedly, he fails to love me.

$推荐写在作文的第一段，用于描述图画作文的时候使用（两幅图或一幅图两个主体两个动作的作文）。$
$一幅图一个主体，只能有两个动作（一个主要一个次要）。一幅图两个主体，两个动作。两幅图。$

• 2003作文漫画描述

• In the former picture, a flower is growing healthily. On the contrary, In the latter one, it is dying.

• In the picture, the eldest son is kicking out his father. At the same time, other three children are stopping the old citizen.

• Picture的替换：

  • Cartoon/drawing/painting/caricature/photograph

Not only…but also…

 Keeping pets can reduce loneliness.
 Keeping pets can cultivate make children have love heart.

• Keeping pets not only can reduce loneliness, but also can make children have love heart.
  $Notonly放在实义动词的前面，be动词后面.$
• Respecting parents not only keeps Chinese convention virtue but also proves the responsibility of children.
  $Notonly\dots butalso推荐写在作文的第二段分析原因（三个）的时候使用。$
• Abusing phones not only affects the communication of parents and children, but also do harm to our health.

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复合句(从句)的满分表达

1、主语从句

• It is common knowledge that women are always right.

• 显而易见，总所周知：

  • It proves my belief that …
  • It is self-evident that …
  • It has been found that …
  • It is beyond dispute that …
  • It is universally acknowledged that …

• What looks worse is that I forgot my homework.

  • What has been widely accepted is that …

• $本句型可以写在任一个陈述句前面,大作文主语从句推荐写在第一段的第一句话的前面引出描述图画.$

2、同位语和同位语从句

• 1、名词作同位语
  • My boyfriend, a rich bussiness man, really has no much time to accompany me, a university student.
  • A man, a football fan, is writing the name of Becham on his face.
  • Pollution, a global hot topic, becomes distinctly fearful.
  • Confidence, an active mentality, keeps as essential as air and water.
  • $不要超过两次$
• 2、同位语从句
  • The evidence that she has big eyes manifests that she proves a beauty.
  • The evidence that a sea of girls wear skirts manifests that summer is coming.
  • The evidence that cooperation can make adults finish their work quickly manifests that it seems exceedingly essential.
  • make sb do something替换：
    • have/get/enable sb do sth
  • $本句型推荐写在作文第二段分析原因的时候使用$

3、定语和定语从句

• Success belong to those sparing no efforts.
• He is a man abandoned by God.
• 定语在作文中的使用
  $出现名词可以加定语将句子拉长。但是，在第一段描述图画的时候，只要见到名词，都要加定语，使语言生动。$
  • An American girl looking young as well as graceful is wearing Chinese conventional costume of the minority.
  • An American girl looking young as well as graceful is wearing Chinese conventional costume which looks pretty popular in the western part of China.
  • The eldest son looking pretty fat as well as ugly is kicking out his father in the center of the playground.
• 万能定语
  • 好的
    • as well as连接两个形容词
    • cute, lovely, little
    • graceful, elegant
    • confident, energetic
    • Enthusiastic, passionate
    • who looks distinctly impressive to the readers
  • 坏的
    • Fat, cruel, ugly
    • negative, dispassioned
    • terrible, disgusting
    • who looks rather less impressive to readers.
  • A lamp looking distincly little as well as cute is brightening the darkness which looks rather less impressive to the readers.
• 定从的满分表达
  • He proves a lady-killer, which looks rather self-evident.
  • which leaves experts and scientists a deep impression.
  • which provokes the public’s widespread concerns.
  • $定语从句的满分表达是：which可以引导修饰整个句子的定语从句，和主句之间用逗号隔开。$
  • $定语从句可以写到任何一个陈述句后面。但是，推荐写在第二段分析原因(某个比较短的原因)的后面$
    • Happiness enables all children and adults to make more friends, which has been found.

4、状语和状语从句

• 何为状语

  • 副词
  • 时间、地点、原因、目的、结果、条件、让步(although)、伴随、方式、比较

• 状语在作文中的使用

  • 作文中任何一句话都可以加一个状语成分，拉长句子。但是，在描述图画的时候一定要加状语，使语言完整。并且在描述图画的时候，通常是加时间或地点状语。
  • I am having class because I want pass the examination, in the dormitory, at 9 o’clock.

• 状语的位置

  • 位置很灵活，随便放，句首、句末最多

• 万能状语

  • 描述图画
    • in the center of the vivid picture
  • 描述原因
    • as every one can see it
    • with the rapid advance of science and technology
    • in our contemporary society
    • in the general routine of everyday living
    • although quite a few of adults fail to focus on it

• 例子(乐观主义精神、小油灯、…)

  • What has been found is that in the easy caticature, the left man looking pretty negative as well as dispassioned is saying “it is over.” when the bottle is falling down. Unexpectedly, the right optimistic one is saying “there is a little.” at the same time.
  • A man, a football fan, is spending 300 in having his hair cut into becham’s style, in a barber shop.
  • Keeping pets, in our contemporary society, can cultivate our patience although they feel exceedingly dirty.
  • Pursuing stars will waste our time and money although their singing sounds moving.
  • $Although推荐写在第二段分析原因的时候使用.$

• 状语从句满分表达

  • so…that…
    • She looks so graceful that she can attract many eyes of men.
    • $只要出现形容词或副词都能写成so...that...$
    • Respecting parents keeps so significant that …
    • Spoiling children becomes so fearful that independence should be emphasized among our kids.
    • Sth/Sb is so significant/fearful that it is time to pay much attention to the issue.
    • $so...that...推荐写在作文第一段最后一句话引出文章中心时使用，或者是第三段第一句话总结的时候使用，写成倒装是满分句型.$
    • pay attention to替换
      • place great emphasis on…
      • attach great importance to…
      • focus on…
  • 分词作状语
  • I hate you, I will kill you.
  • Hating you, I will kill you.
  • I, hating you, will kill you.
  • $分词作状语的满分表达是，把分词作为插入语使用.$
  • 描述美国小女孩
    • The American girl is smiling, the american gril is wearing Chinese costume.(一个主体两个动作)
    • The American girl looking young as well as cute, smiling when she is taking a photograph, is wearing Chinese costume which is popular in the west of china.
    • smiling in the center of the vivid photograph
  • 描述上网
    • A sea of children and adults are surfing on the internet, a sea of children and adults are seperated by the internet.
    • A sea of children and adults sitting in front of the computer, surfing on the internet in their small rooms, are seperated by the computers.
    • looking rather terrible as well as negative
  • $分词作插入语推荐写在作文第一段，用于描述一幅图一个主体两个动作的时候使用.$
  • 模板
    • Sb/sth(定语), doing sth(次要动作)(定、状), are doing sth(主要动作)(定、状).
  • 描述火锅
    • A hot pot not only delicious, but also nutritional, smoking in the center of the vivid cartoon, is filled with different cultures from china and western nations.
  • different替换
    • various
    • A variety of
    • diverse

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插入语

• 常见的副词及短语
  • indeed
  • surely
  • however
  • obviously
  • frankly
  • naturally
  • luckily
  • certainly
• 常见的形容词及短语
  • needless to say
  • most important of all
• 简洁的具有完整意义的句子
  • as I see it
  • what’s more/what’s worse
  • it is said that
  • As far as we know
• 常见的介词短语
  • in one’s opinion/judgement
  • to my knowledge
• 常见的现在分词短语
  • strickly speaking
• 常见的动词不定式短语
  • to tell the truth
  • to put it in another way

$插入语推荐写在作文第一段的最后一句,第二段的第一句,第三段的第一句(选一处).$

• example
  • Respecting parent, to my knowledge, is argued very important.
  • There, to my knowledge, seem a sea of reasons…

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双重否定

• never fail to(表示强调)
  • $写在任一个肯定句的主谓之间.和插入语的位置一样$
• cannot have failed to do sth(一定要去做某事)
  • $第三段措施(父母/个人)$
• example
  • There never fail to seem a sea of reasons…
  • Confidence never fails to be as important as air and water.
  • Authorities cannot have failed to make strict laws to punnish illegal activities.
  • Parents cannot have failed to encourage their kids to take part in some meaningful activities.