2014年英语一作文partB漫画作文

题目

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay you should

1. describe the drawing briefly
2. explain its intended meaning,
3. give your comments
   

做题点

1.使用三段式,第一段:图片内容;第二段:图片暗示;第三段:写自己的评论
2.描述图片上的信息时,只描述其中的人物动作和人物,不要多写他们是在干什么(用一两句话描写完)
3.写图片暗示时,发散思维,往大的主题上靠(孝顺等),然后再写现在年轻人没有做到图片上的行为的一些原因
4.写自己的评论时,写我们应该做到图片上的行为,比如平时怎么做之类的.

答案

As we can see,filial piety is prevailing all through the two pictures:in the first frame, an amiable mother is supporting her little daughter while in the second frame, her daughter, who has grown up, is supporting her aged mother instead。
What a happy family full of precious love! The implication conveyed in these two pictures is self-evident: we need to show our concern and respect to our parents. However, most of us fail to do this job. First of all, as our lifestyle gallops along, we are less likely to hold enough awareness on our filial piety. As young men who deem the career as the priority, they often choose to migrate with their jobs, work around the clock and rest with the work files, leaving parents in empty nests.Besides,many people are used to substituting their care for parents with money or gifts. While it is beyond dispute that material support can improve ones’living standards, what those aged people need most is the mental satisfaction and love from their children such as a simple call,a short being back home.
It is easy to draw this conclusion that,to our parents, nothing can be better than the filial piety from children.Whenever possible,we should gather around the table for a “reunion dinner” with our parents; whether busy or not,we need to give our parents a call and tell them we are fine.

答案知识点

----单词
filial piety 孝道,孝顺
prevailing 流行的;普遍的adj
amiable 和蔼可亲的adj
aged年迈的adj
implication暗示,含意n
self-evident自信的adj
concern 关心n
gallop飞驰v
awareness 意识n
deem认为v
priority优先考虑的事n
migrate 转移v
substitute代替v
dispute 意见不同n
material材料n
mental 精神的adj
satisfaction满意n

----短语
grow up长大成人
fail to do 失败去做…
in empty nests在空巢
reunion dinner团圆饭,年夜饭
give sb a call给…打个电话
most of us我们大部分人
be used to doing习惯于做…
living standards生活水平

-----句型
1.很容易得出这样的结论
It is easy to draw this conclusion that…
2.只要有可能
Whenever possible,…
3.无论是否忙碌…
whether busy or not,…
4.随着我们生活方式的飞速发展
as our lifestyle gallops along,…

----通用
1.顺序词
First of all首先
Besides此外

自己的作文知识点

----单词
imply暗示v

----短语
Send children to school送孩子去上学
Thirty years ago在三十年前
look after照顾
In return for raising us作为她养育我们的回报