分析英语六级作文时,应该从文章结构层次去进行分开剖析(而不是像某些机构一样,按照文章主题去分类,那你不得10个主题背10篇?)文章的结构就三段,这三段的大致内容如下:
1]引出主题 + 个人观点;2]总起原因 + 原因例子;3]重述观点 + 引出措施 + 主体措施 + 总结展望
1]引出主题 + 个人观点
(1)引出主题
引出主题方式可以根据题目类型进行分类,一是社会现象类,二是图表类
①社会现象类
社会现象类题有以下两种方式来引出主题,由题意看题目中是强调"....的发展"还是“....是个趋势”
1)....的发展
(Admittedlly,)...(The present-day society)...in...(China)...has witnessed [拟人] tremendously postive development of ..../.....becoming a tremendously positive force, and it's imperative for us to deserve to/we are obliged to harness this precious opportunity/advanced tool to better/aid ourselves/.... and pursue our dreams/.....
(诚然/无可否认,)...(当今的中国社会)见证了.....的巨大的积极的发展/...成为了一种积极的力量,并且我们必须要利用这个宝贵的机会/我们有义务利用这个先进的工具来追求我们的梦想/辅助我们的....
比如:题目是现在越来越多的研究生用AI来辅助他们完成科研,请问你对这件事情怎么看?
你可以写:"Admittedly, the academic community in China has witnessed AI becoming a tremendously positive force, and we are obliged to use this advanced tool to aid our research and create scientific outcomes."
无可否认,中国学术界已经见证了人工智能成为一股巨大的积极力量,我们应该使用这种先进的工具来帮助我们的研究并创造科学成果。
2)...是个趋势
In the present-day society, it has become a trend for ..... to .....deserve to ......,
3)干还是不干?
To ...,or not to, that is a question, a question raised in the picture above, and to be answered by each of us(/educational participants,students,teachers and parents) ,old or young, rich or poor.[莎士比亚]
4)....是否重要?
If there is anyone who still doubts the significance of ......, who still wonders what to do;who still questions the power of...., the picture above is your answers.The following is your answer.
②图表类
As is demonstrated in the chart, (China)... has witnessed[拟人] ......
如图所示,(中国)....见证了....
1)急剧/稳步的/逐渐变慢的/缓慢的 + 上升/下降
a steady dramatic/decline/gradually slowing/slow increase/decline in the number of..... from (1980) to (2019)
如果大胆可以用比喻: 下降:experienced a waterfall(改卷老师要是看不懂就倒霉了)
2)围绕...波动/一系列波动
the number of fluctuate around...../ (China has witnessed) that the number of..... from (1980) to (2019) shows fluctuations.
(2)个人观点
表达个人观点的方式取决于你接下来要表达的论点大致着重点:是强调“....是重要的(...是更重要的)”?还是强调"....是缺乏的"?
①....是重要的(...是更重要的)
用插入语表身份
I, as a youngster/ an undergraduate , deem that it is of great necessity for (us) to .....(but it is of greater necessity for (us)... to )
作为一个年轻人/本科毕业生,我认为...是必要/重要的,然而.....是更重要的
②"....是缺乏的"
虚拟语气
It is high time that...
早该是....做....的时候了