作文笔记0926

大作文模板(三段式+442写作阵型):

P1(首段是不同的):四/五句话

            1)文字情景开头段;

            2)图表情景开头段;、

            3)图画情景开头段;

P2+P3: 二三段相同

            P2 :四句话

            P3: 两句话

 

图表文写作结构:

P1:    4-5句话描述图表;

P2:    4句话提供3个论据进行论证;

P3:    2-3句话进行总结+呼吁+预测(备选)

图表类型:

1) 柱状图:bar chart

2) 饼图: pie chart 

3) 线图: line graph 

4)表格 : table 

具体分为两类:

1)静态数据

2)动态数据

大作文的数据:动静有别

图表情景作文

P1, s1 :有变化; s2: (对象1)具体变化(上升还是下降):

         s3:(对象1)数据引用(开始,后来)s4:(对象2)与此同时。

Para2与Para3与文字情景作文相同

首段记忆要点

首段[有变化]:

S1  What is shown in the chart above reveals clearly that [remarkable/moderate]changes have taken place with regard to + 主题(名词/名短)

例1:university graduates' expected income  毕业生期望薪酬

例2 the recruitment of Master of Engineer  工程硕士

例3 DINK families in China 

主题来自题目中给的那句中文,例如2017年的真题,“2013-2015我国博物馆数量和参观人数”

What is shown in the chart above reveals clearly that remarkable changes have taken place with regard to the numbers of museums and visitors from 2013 to 2015.

S2  Based upon the data of the chart[diagram], one can see that the + 对象1 has been on a steady (sharp/dramatic) rise [decline] all the time.

2017年真题参观人数变化显著,所以对象1应该是参观人数

Based upon the data of the chart, one can see that the number of visitors has been on a sharp rise all the time.

例1 expected income per month.

例2. number 或 percentage of  recruitment of ME

例3. such families

[数据引用,针对对象1] (S3) In the year of [1998,图表数据],it was only about [3100RMB] [ 1%], while within no more than several (具体数字)years, it [the number]或[percentage] went up [down] to [2100RMB] 或 [12%] in [2009].

我们描述首尾两端就好了,中间的数据不用描述

(S4)  At the same time, 对象2 has experienced a gradual rise (fall) + from 数据+(起始年份)to + 数据+ (终止年份)

大作文的写作步骤

1)审图:动静有别

2) 拟定主题词或主题句

       动态的是主题词,静态主题句

3)确定对象词:对象1(显著数据)/对象2(与对象1相对)/对象3(不显著的,变化不大的,保持平衡的)

            注意:对象1是升/降,对象2就是降/升;对象1和对象2可能是同升或者同降,但是是变化幅度大的那个一定是对象1

4)确定单位词

           如:一家银行     

                  一根冰淇淋   piece / bar   

                  一束花  bunch

           数字类:

                百  hundred

                千  thousand 

                万  ten thousand 或者 0.01 million 注意:没有s 

             百万  million 

            十亿 billion

            注意:以上单位,与具体数字搭配时,不加s,与of搭配时,加s

           Hundreds of thousands of 成千上万的

5)按照模板来仿写

        2017年真题:

      What is shown in the chart above reveals clearly that remarkable changes have taken place with regard to 主题词(the numbers of museums and visitors in China from 2013 to 2015). Based upon the data of the chart, one can see that 对象1( the number of visitors )has been on a sharp rise all the time.  In the year of [2013,起始年份],it was only about 63.78 million, while within no more than several (three 具体数字)years, it went up to 78.11 million  in [2015,终止年份]. At the same time, 对象2 (the number of museums )has experienced a gradual increase(或者growth) ( 不要与上文的rise重复) + from 4165 to 4692 . (年份就不写了).

     2014 年真题

     1)动态

     2)确定主题词

                 20年间中国城镇人口及乡村人口:

                 the urban and rural populations in China over the two decades.

 

     3)确定对象词     

                 对象1      the number of the urban population   

                 对象2      the number of the rural population

     4)确定单位词

     What is shown in the chart above reveals clearly that remarkable changes have taken place with regard to 主题词( the urban and rural populations in China over the two decades.). 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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