2019.1.05 independent writing

Admittedly, keep the discoveries secret seems benefits the government and business. But indeed, share it with the world can create more amazing result.

 

Firstly, people from other country may facilitate further development of discoveries. Not all man are specialists in every area, while the fact is a person may just proficient in only one area. So, people from other companies or even foreign countries may finally make contribute to better use of the findings. Take penicillin for example, Scottish scientist Alexander Fleming first made this discovery early at 1928, however, it is just the cooperation with the scientists from various countries that finally make the drug available for civilian use. Had Scottish government just kept this discovery secret from other countries with no relative paper allowed to publish, the drug would keep unknown to humans for decades or even hundreds of years before it finally be used for medical application which have saved millions of lives. It is just the willingness for sharing the finding that make other talented scientist such as Howard Florey from the Oxford team and a series of relative scientists interested in this discovery which make the mass production of the drug possible.

 

Secondly, we need to have solid international laws to regulate the sharing the discoveries with the world. Sharing the findings, as mentioned above, is a better way to promote to deep use of them. So, some additional charge need be paid before make it used for commercial purpose which would encourage more people to share their finding with the world. Additionally, this money collected from the use of their founding can support further study of their discovery which may generate more excited novel discoveries. Had no regulation to guarantee had established, scientist of the findings would feel frustrated by the fact the people who adapted his method can make more fortune than himself. Thus, to make more discovery finders enthusiastically sharing with the world, regulation is the first step.

 

In conclusion, not sharing with the world may impede the extensive use of the discovery while sharing with guaranteed regulations can bonus both the discoverer and the user.

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Admittedly, keep the discoveries secret seems benefits the government and business. But indeed, sharing it with the world can create more amazing result.

 

Firstly, people from other countries may facilitate further development of discoveries. ‘’Nobody knows everything about anything.” The fact is a person may just be proficient in only one area. So, people from other companies or even foreign countries may have better use of the findings. Take penicillin for example, Scottish scientist Alexander Fleming first made this discovery early at 1928, however, it is just the cooperation with the scientists from various countries that finally make the drug available for civilian use. Had Scottish government just kept this discovery secret from other countries with no relative paper allowed to publish, the drug would keep unknown to humans for decades or even hundreds of years before it finally be used for medical application which have saved millions of lives. It is just the willingness for sharing the finding that make other talented scientist such as Howard Florey from the Oxford team and a series of relative scientists interested in this discovery which make the mass production of the drug possible.

 

Secondly, we need to have solid international laws to regulate the sharing the discoveries with the world. Sharing the findings, as mentioned above, is a better way to promote to deep use of them. So, some additional charge need be paid before make it used for commercial purpose which would encourage more people to share their finding with the world. Additionally, this money collected from the use of their finding can support further study of their discovery which may generate more excited novel discoveries. Had no regulation to guarantee had established, scientist of the findings would feel frustrated by the fact the people who adapted his method can make more fortune than himself. Thus, to make more discovery finders enthusiastically sharing with the world, regulation is the first step.

 

In conclusion, not sharing with the world may impede the extensive use of the discovery while sharing with guaranteed regulations can bonus both the discoverer and the user.