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I wrote another essay for common app on topic 2 about failure. I followed structures and advices from carrie and Ike. If I need to limit my words to 650, I will need to abridge quite much and leave the essence. I don't know whether I should write 2 events in the story or leave only one. It is very silly to link some trivial things to life or study. But, anyway, many dean of admission requires us to do so on common app, according to advisers. 

It is no different than the essays I wrote during middle school in Mandarin classes. I don't really like them coz many topics are meaningless and require but bunch of words to describe a thing. Anyway, I will still make my essays better.