六级作文速成模版笔记

六级作文笔记

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1. 六级的作文是考议论文（essay：表示要你写的是议论文）

2. 议论文有3种类型

   1. 题目出现 how to (问题解决型)
   2. 题目出现what ，why或 给出某种现象、漫画 （现象解释型）
   3. 题目出现option、choice、choose （观点选择型）

3. 作文模版

   1. 三个段落 （11句话）

      • 第一个段落：（3句话）

        • 第1-2 句话：提出问题
        • 第3句话 ：过度句（过度到第二段中）

      • 第二个段落：（6句话）分别是三个论点+3个论据

        • 第一句 ：论点1
        • 第二句：论据1
        • 第三句：论点2
        • 第四句：论据2
        • 第五句：论点3
        • 第六句：论据3

      • 第三个段落：（2句话）

        • 第1句话 ：重申观点
        • 第2句话：提出期望

4. 问题解决型模版：（问题解决型注重如何去做某事）

   1. 提出问题，并引出观点 do sth 是题干给出的观点：

      With the rapid (development / globalzation/ communication) of (education / economy / culture / technology / society / medical service), it is of great necessity for sb to do sth

      随着（）的快速（），对某人来说做某事是很有必要的

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   2. 过度句：引出如何具体做某事：

      the following solution can account for this issue

      以下的解决措施可以解决这个问题

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   3. 论点1：

      First and foremost , there is no doubt that + 内容

      首先也是最重要的，毫无疑问的是+内容

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   4. 论据1：

      Based on a most recent survey it is revealed that a majority of successful social elites prefer doing something

      依据最近的一项研究，它表明大部分成功的社会人士更喜欢做某事

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   5. 论点2：

      Furthermore / Additionally it is obvious that it is beneficial for sb to do sth

      此外 / 另外 ，很明显的是，对于谁来说，做什么事情是非常有益处的

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   6. 论据2：

      Where there is sth there is sth

      哪里有什么，哪里就会有什么

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   7. 论点3：

      Last but not least no one can deny that it is heigh time that we can do sth

      最后也是最重要的是，没有人可以否认，我们是时候做什么事了

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   8. 论据3：

      only in this way can we do sth

      只有通过这个方法，我们才可以做某事

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   9. 重申观点：do sth 是题目所给出的观点

      in a world it is clear that we should do sth

      总的来说，很明显的是我们要做某事

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   10. 提出期望：

       If we try our utmost to do sth, the future of () will be promising and rosy

       如果尽我们全力去做一件事，那么什么的未来将会变得很有前途和光明

       If we spare no effert to do sth the future of () will be promising and rosy

       如果尽我们全力去做一件事，那么什么的未来将会变得很有前途和光明

5. 问题解决型模版总结：

   With the rapid (development / globalization / communication), of (education / economy / culture / society / medical service /technology) it is of great necessity for sb to do sth(题目给出的观点) . The following solutions can account for this issue

   First and foremost it is no doubt that we should do sth. Based on a recent survey, it is revealed that a majotity of successful social elites prefer doing sth. Furthermore it is obvious that it is beneficial for us to do sth. Where there is sth, there is sth. Last but not least no one can deny that it is heigh time we should do sth. Olny in this way can we do sth.

   in a world it is clear that we should do sth if we try our utmost to do sth ,the future of (our life) will be promising and rosy

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6. 观点选择型模版：

   1. 阐述问题，列出不同的观点，并做出选择

      With the rapid (development / communciation / globalization) of (education / economy / society / medical service / technology / culture) nowadays sb have different options upon something. Some thinks that 观点1 is benefical while others think 观点2 is a better choice. Personally, I prefer the former(前者) / latter(后者)

      随着（）的快速（），如今，某些人在某些事情上有不同的选择 ，有人认为观点1有意义，与此同时，其他人认为观点2是一个更好的选择，对于我来说，我更喜欢前者 / 后者

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   2. 过渡句

      the following reasons can account for my preference

      以下的原因可以解释我的喜好

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   3. 论点1：

      First and foremost there is no doubt that + 论点1

      首先，也是最重要的事 ，毫无疑问的是 +论点1

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   4. 论据1：

      Based on a most recent survey , it is revealed that a majority of successful social elites admitted that

      基于最近一段调查，大部分的成功社会精英承认 + 内容

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   5. 论点2：

      Furthermore / Additionally it is obvious that +论点2

      此外 / 另外 很明显的是

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   6. 论据2：

      Where there is sth there is sth

      哪里有什么，哪里就会有什么

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   7. 论点3：

      Last but not least no one can deny that +论点3

      最后也是最重要的是，没有人可以否认 …

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   8. 论据3：

      Though /Although something something

      尽管…但是…

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   9. 重申观点：

      in a world ,it is clear that A is better / more suitable than B

      总的来说，观点A比观点B好

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   10. 提出期望：

       If we try our utmost to do sth, the future of () will be promising and rosy

       如果尽我们全力去做一件事，那么什么的未来将会变得很有前途和光明

       If we spare no effert to do sth the future of () will be promising and rosy

       如果尽我们全力去做一件事，那么什么的未来将会变得很有前途和光明

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7. 观点选择型模版总结：

   With the rapid () of () ,nowadays sb have different options upon something Some thinks sth is benefical while others think sth is a better choice .Personally I prefer the former / latter. The following reasons can account for my preference

   First and foremost there is no doubt that +论点1 . Based on a most recent survey, it is revealed that a majority of successful social elites admitted that sth. Furthermore it is obvious that +论点2. Where there is sth , there is sth. Last but not least, there is no one deny that +论点3，Although sth , sth

   In a world it is clear that A is more suitable than B. If we spare no efforts to do sth ,the future of () will be promising and rosy

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8. 现象解释型模版：

   1. 阐述背景+提出现象：

      With the rapid () of () +现象产生的背景 + 现象(题目所给)

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   2. 过度句

      The following are something of them

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   3. 论点1：

      First and foremost there is not doubt that +论点1

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   4. 论据1：

      Based on a most recent survey, it is reveals that a majority of successful social elites admitted that + sth

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   5. 论点2：

      Furthermore / Additionally it is obvious that +论点2

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   6. 论据2：

      where there is sth there is sth

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   7. 论点3：

      Last but not least there is no one deny that +论点3

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   8. 论据3：

      Although / Though sth , sth

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   9. 重申观点：

      in a world + 观点

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   10. 提出期望：

       If we spare no effect to do sth ,the future of sth will be promising and rosy

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9. 三个模版对比：

   1. 第一个段落：

      第1-2 句话：提出问题:

      • 问题解决型（how to）：

        with the rapid development of (education,society,technology,culture,economy(经济),medical service(医疗服务))：随着什么什么的快速发展（六个方面任选一个），it is of great necessity for sb to do something :对于某个人来说，去做某件事是很重要的 sb something 都可以找题目

        • With the rapid development of (what) it is of great necessity for sb to do something

        例如：

        ​ 题目：The importance of speaking ability and how to improve it.

        ​ 开头：With the rapid development ofeducation, it is of great necessity for youngsters to improve our speaking ability

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      • 观点选择型（option、choose、choice）：阐述问题，列出不同的观点，并做出选择

        with the rapid development(发展) / communication(交流) / globalization(全球化) of (education ,society ,technology ,culture ,economy ,medical service)：随着(经济的)快速发展/(经济的)快速交流/(经济的)快速全球化 …

        nowadays sb have different options upon somethiong :如今，某些人在某些事情上有不同的选择 Some thinks that +问题给出的观点1 is beneficial while others think +问题给出的观点2 is a better choice ,Personally,I prefer the former(前者) /latter (后者)

        with the rapid (development) of (education) , nowadays youngsters have different options upon something. Some thinks that 观点1 is beneficial while others think +观点2 is a better choice,Personally,I prefer the former / latter

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      • 现象解释型：阐述背景+提出现象

        with the rapid development of () + 背景阐述 + 现象（从题目获取）

        • eg: With the rapid development of economy there is an increasing number of citizens moving from suburbs(乡下) to the urban(都市) area, There are a large number challenges of living in a big city

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      第3句话 ：过度句:

      • 问题解决型：

        the following solutions can account for this issue：以下的解决方案可以解决这个问题

      • 观点选择型：

        the following reasons can account for my preference(喜好)

      • 现象解释型：

        the following solutions can account for this phenomenon ：以下的解决方案可以解决这个现象

        the followings are some of them

   2. 第二个段落：（6句话）分别是三个论点+3个论据：

      1. 论点1 :First and foremost 首先，也是最重要的事 there is no doubt that 毫无疑问的是 +论点1

         • First and foremost , there is no doubt that + 论点

      2. 论据1:Based on a most recent survey 基于最近一段调查，it is revealed that a majority of successful social elites 据调查显示，大部分的成功社会精英+内容

         • 问题解决型：

           Based on a most recent survey it is revealed that a majority of successful society elites prefer doing something

         • 观点选择型：

           Based on a most recent survey it is revealed that a majority of successful society elites admitted that + 内容

         • 现象解释型：

           Based on a most recent survey it is revealed that a majority of successful society elites admitted that + 内容

      3. 论点2：Furthermore：此外，it is obvious that :很明显

         • 问题解决型： 加上 it is beneficial for sb to do something :对于谁来说，做什么事情是非常有益处的

           Furthermore it is obvious that it is beneficial for sb to do something

         • 观点选择型：

           Additionally / Furthermore it is obvious that +内容

         • 现象解释型：

           Additionally / Furthermore it is obvious that +内容

      4. 论据2：万能谚语 （有志者事竟成）where there is a will,there is a way :这句话本义是 哪里有意志，哪里就有解决方案。

         • 模版为 where there is something , there is something : 有什么，就会有什么
         • eg: where there are friend ,there is communication . Therefore , our speaking ability can be improved

      5. 论点3：

         • 问题解决型：

           Last but not least :最后也是最重要的是 no one can deny that :没有人可以否定 it is high time that we can do something :是时候做什么事了

           • Last but not least no one can deny that it is high time that we can do something

         • 观点选择型：

           Last but not least no one can deny that + something

         • 现象解释型：

           Last but not least no one can deny that + something

           Last but not least needless to say that + something

      6. 论据3：

         • 问题解决型：

           only in this way can we do something ：只有这样，我们才可以…

         • 观点选择型：

           Though something something: 尽管…但是…

           • Though some people do succeed in starting a bussiness of their own , most of entroprenuers(创业家) failed when they just start

         • 现象解释型：

           Though something something: 尽管…但是…

           Alhough something something: 尽管…但是…

   3. 第三段：

      1. 重申观点：

         • 问题解决型：

           in d word：总之 it is clear that we should do something：很明显的是我们应该干某事

           • in a word it is clear that we should do something

         • 观点选择型：

           in d word A is better / more suitable than B

         • 现象解释型：

           in a world it is of great necessity for sb to do sth:对某人来说，做某事是有必要的

      2. 提出期望

         • 问题解决型：

           if we try our utmost(最大限度) to do something ：尽我们全力去做一件事，the future of our life will be both promising (有前途的) and rosy(乐观的)

           • if we try our utmost to do something the future of our life will be both promising and rosy

         • 观点选择型：

           if we spare no efforts to () the future of () will be both promising and rosy

           • if we spare no efforts to work hard in our career the future of our career will be both promising and rosy

         • 现象解释型：

           If we spare no effect to do sth ,the future of sth will be promising and rosy

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