主体段:有利的一面。郊区运行成本更低;有更多的空间;促进地方经济发展;避免过度拥堵( costs are lower in regional areas; there is more space;provide jobs to boost deprived areas; avoid further overcrowding in the cities.)
主体段:不利的一面。工人们生活在城市里更方便;城市里有更好的通勤和基建;公司位于郊区会导致离客户、供应商等很远( greater availability of skilled workers in big cities;better transport and infrastructure;companies based in regional areas are further from their clients,providers and other contacts. )
总结段:改写开头段观点。
句子 | 原文 | 分析 |
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1 | Owning a bicycle and using it frequently seems to be much **less popular **today. | 对原文中的题目进行改写。 |
2 | I believe that the growth in the size of cities and the advanced modern transport system are the main reasons for this. | 给出自己的观点 |
3 | The government should take steps to change this situation. | 措施观点 |
4 | The first reason why riding bicycles is no longer popular is that cities have been growing bigger. | 第二段开头:交代第一个原因 |
5 | This means that the distance between home and destinations has become much farther. | 城市变大->距离变大 |
6 | If people keep the habit of cycling, then they will find it really time-consuming and energy-consuming. | 对距离的具体解释(举例) |
7 | When they finally get to the school or office, they will probably feel exhausted and can hardly concentrate on their work or study. | 对距离的具体解释(举例) |
8 | Another cause is that a greater variety of means of transport are available to daily commuters today. | 第三段开头:交代第二个原因 |
9 | In the past, riding a bicycle was the main choice for many people to go to work or for fun. | 对距离的具体解释(举例) |
10 | Today, however, people living in cities and towns can have a wider range of choices, including more bus lines, taxies and even the Uber service. | 对距离的具体解释(举例) |
11 | Any of these is more efficient and comfortable than cycling and therefore this traditional way of transport has been losing popularity. | 回开头照应第三句 |
12 | It is undeniable that riding a bike is beneficial for both the individual and society, so measures should be taken to entice and encourage people to be more active in this choice. | 引出解决方案 |
13 | Firstly, the government could build special lanes for cyclists, so that they can ride safely and quickly. | 解决方案1 |
14 | In addition, monetary rewards should be provided to people who ride their bicycles more often. | 解决方案2 |
15 | In this way, more people would have the incentive to use this old-fashioned way to commute. | 结果 |
16 | In conclusion, the development of modern cities has led to a decreasing number of people traveling by bicycle. | 总结重复原因 |
17 | I believe that measures mentioned above could effectively reverse this situation. | 肯定解决方案 |