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亲子关系:parenthood
建立和加强:established 安定 strenthened
In modern society, it never fails to be an increasingly discussed issue that how to develop a harmony and healthy parenthood in family. The anxious arisen in last century of the school record of children has been more and more intense, which drives some parents to devote a large amount of time on their children’s study. This might make some impressional individuals to draw a conclusion that the best use of our time on children is to help them doing their schoolwork together. However, this opinion suffers both logical and pratical fallacies. Considering the following factors, I, personally, am in favor of the opinion that parents should spend time playing or doing some phisical exercise with their children.
For one thing, students in modern society suffers too much pressure from teachers and peer youngsters. The competetion begins not when we step into the adult society but in our school age. Students are exhausted by the curious of their assignments as well as the grade of tests, which makes them much more likely to be nervous than before. According to a comprehensive investigation conducted by Renmin Net, one of the most authorized media in China, 85 percent of respondents, the students in Beijing claim that they are under too much pressure in school. The Chinese goverment also endeavor to release the burden on school-age children in recent years. Therefore, when we are tired of our work and have a little time accompanying with family, we should not concentrate on these annoying stuffs and just enjoy the peaceful time with someone that we loved.
For another thing, it is the duty of teachers and school to concentrate on the study of children, so at home we should cultivate some other aspectes of children’s growing such like sports, talents, or even merely a good habit. Playing and doing some sports with children could release their pressure as well as keep their mentally and physically healthy. Taking myself as an example, when I was a child, my parents are so busy in making money for arranging me a brighter future, thus they have little time to accompany me. Teachers always acclaim me about my outstanding grades and believe that physical health do less contribution to children’s future. Then when I was taking the physical test in my university, I failed every course. From then on I have to do exercise everyday after that. That inspired me that the all-rounded development of children is of great importance.
Additionally, considering the children’s interest, playing games seems much more appealing to them. By doing something that they really favored of, a harmony parenthood could be easily established and strenthend. It is the happinest memory for children to have common interest with their parents.
In a nutshell, spending time with children playing games and doing some atheletic activities seems a sound choice. Anyway, there is one thousand Hamlet in one thousand people’s eyes. I hope the people who hold opposite ideas might compromise after exposed to this article.