1.一些缩写尽量不要出现,按规定是不应该出现的
2.避免不必要的there is和there are
There are many teachers work hard every day换成
Many teachers work hard every day.
3.避免使用Really,every,a lot,so
Many students think math is very hard→isdifficult(不用修饰词,而是换了一个更强的词)
He is really smart→is smart(这样会使整个句式更加清晰)
A lot of parents ……→Many parents
A lot of time is wasted→Much time
4.尽量避免消极话语,应用积极话语(被动的就是一种消极语态)
Healthcare reforms were implemented by Obama 被动语态:be implemented by
Obama implemented healthcare reforms.
The war was won by the Frech→Frech won the war
5.用更加有力度的词(如果你把一个动作换成了动作加名词,那么你就弱化了你的动作)
weak:He give assistance to my friend;strong:He assisted my friend.
weak:Make a objection;strong:objected
weak:conducted an investigation;strong:investigated