Unipus-writing exercise Expository_Text_09

半动态图表+年龄的表达

Q: The charts below shows the main reasons for study of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

首段

改写题目

The bar chart compares students of different ages in terms of what motivates them to study and the support they receive from employers.

主体部分第一段（第一个图，先说for career的情况，然后说for interest）

最高值是年轻人为了职业学习的百分比

Young people study primarily to further their careers, with up to 80% of those under the age of 26 studying for this purpose. This figure is significantly higher than the proportion of those who study out of personal interest.

然后描述趋势

The gap between these two proportions narrows as students get older, and the figures for those aged 40 to 49 are the same (40%).

最后说一下for interest

Students aged over 49 overwhelmingly study for interest(70%), rather than for career(under 20%).

主体部分第二段（第二个图）

最高值和最低值

Around 60% of students receive support from employers for further education.

然后描述趋势

The figure drops steadily with age, and only one third of those 30-39-year old students are supported by employers.

最后描述趋势

In contrast, older students, namely, those in their forties and those aged 50 or more, are more llikely to gain support(35% and 42% respectively).

总结段

总结趋势和主要特征

Overall, younger students are more likely to study for career purposes, while their older counterparts are more motivated by personal interst. Employers give more support to younger students than to employees of other ages.

(To be continued)