英语新概念2-回译法-lesson14

第一次回译

I had a amusing experience. I kept driving to the next town when I left a small village in the south of Franch.A teenager waved to me in the path.I stopped my car, he asked me to give him a lift.As soon as he get my car,I say good morning in Franch,and he also replied me in Franch. But I did not say Franch expect a few words. We both did not say anything on trip.When would arrived the town,this teenager said slowly:"Can you speak English?"I quickly know he is a English!

• 将 “I had a amusing experience.” 改为 “I had an amusing experience.”，修正冠词错误。

• “Franch” 应该为 “France”，即 “法国”。

• “As soon as he get my car,” 中的 “get” 应该改为 “got”，表示过去时。

• “But I did not say Franch expect a few words.” 这句话的意思不太清晰。建议改为 “Except for a few words, I didn’t speak French at all.” 或者 “Apart from a few words, I didn’t speak French.”。

• “We both did not say anything on trip.” 中的 “on trip” 可以改为 “during the trip” 或者 “during our journey”，更符合英语习惯。

• “When would arrived the town,” 应该改为 “When we arrived at the town,”，修正语法错误。

• “I quickly know he is a English!” 中的 “a English” 应该为 “an Englishman”，或者更常见的表达方式是 “he is English”，表示他是英国人。

改进后的翻译如下：

I had an amusing experience. I kept driving to the next town when I left a small village in the south of France. A teenager waved to me on the path. I stopped my car, and he asked me for a lift. As soon as he got into my car, I greeted him with ‘good morning’ in French, and he replied in French as well. But I didn’t speak French except for a few words. We both didn’t say anything during the trip. When we arrived at the town, the teenager suddenly asked me, ‘Can you speak English?’ I quickly realized that he was English!、

GPT的翻译
Last year, I had an amusing experience. After leaving a small village in the south of France, I continued driving towards the next town. Along the way, a young man waved to me. I stopped the car, and he asked me for a ride. As soon as he got in the car, I greeted him with ‘good morning’ in French, and he replied in French as well. Apart from a few individual words, I didn’t speak French at all. We didn’t speak at all during the journey. Just as we were about to reach the town, the young man suddenly spoke up, slowly asking, ‘Can you speak English?’ I quickly realized that he was English!

第二次回译

Last year I had an amusing experience. After leaving the small village in the south Franch.I kept driving to the next town. A young man was _____ to me in the way.I stoped the car,he asked me to give him a lift.When he came in my car,I told him good morning in Franch. He also replyed me in France.Expert for a few words,I did not speak France.We did not say any thing.When I arrived the town, The teenager suddenly asked me "Can you speak English?"I realized quickly that he is a English man himself

GPT翻译
Last year, I had an amusing experience. After leaving a small village in the south of France, I kept driving to the next town. A young man was waving to me on the way. I stopped the car, and he asked me to give him a lift. When he got into my car, I told him “Good morning” in French. He also replied to me in French. Except for a few words, I did not speak French. We did not say anything else. When I arrived in the town, the teenager suddenly asked me, “Can you speak English?” I quickly realized that he was an Englishman himself.