回复审稿意见

https://www.jianshu.com/p/7edb6771594a

 

【SCI修改稿回答审稿人意见范文模板】

【回信】

List of Responses
0.1 Dear Editors and Reviewers:

1.1 Thank you for your letter and for the reviewer's comments concering our manuscript “Title”(ID: ).
1.2 Thank you very much for your careful review and constructive suggestions with regard to our manuscript "Title"(ID).

2.1 Thoses comments are very helpful for us to revise and imporve our paper.
2.2 Those comments are all valuable and very helpful for revising and improving our paper, as well as the importance guiding significane to our researches.

3.1 We have studied these comments carefully and tried our best to revise and imporve the manuscript.
3.2 made great changes in the manuscript according to the reviewer's comments.
3.3 We have studied comments carefully and have made correction which we hope meet with approval.

4.1 Our main corrections in the manuscript and the responds to the reviewer's comments are as follows and a PDF file "xxx.pdf" ( main corrections are marked in red and blue color ).
4.2 Revised portion are marked in red in the paper.

5.1 The main corrections in the paper and the responds to the reviewer's comments are as following:

【回复修改】

6.1 Responds to the reviewer's comments:

6.1.1 Response to comment: [... COMMENT ...]
6.1.2 Response:

...

【回复用语】

7.1 We are very sorry for our negligence of ...
7.2 We are very sorry for our incorrect writing ...
7.3 It is really true as Reviewer suggested that ...
7.4 we have made correction according to the Reviewer's comments.
7.5 we have re-write this part to the Reviewer's suggestion.
7.6 As Reviewer suggested that ...
7.7 Considering the Reviewer's suggestion, we have ...
7.8 Thank you for pointing this out.

8.1 Line 22-33, the statements of "... ... " were corrected as "... ..."
8.2 Line 333, "... ..." was added/deleted.
8.3 ... was usde here as .. to ...
8.4 In addition, by studying that, we can directly compare our results with previous studies.
8.5 more details in the first paragraph of Section 3.3.
8.6 A and B's research groups have done blablablabla. However, the focus of our work is on blablabla, which is very different from A and B's work, and this is also the major contribution of our work.
8.7 We have added the following discussion on this issue in our revised manuscript, see ...

【特别感谢,回信结尾】

9.1 Special thanks to you for your good comments.

3.3 we tried our best to improve the manuscript and made some changes in the manuscript.

4.3 these changes will not influence the content and framework of the paper.

5.2 And here we did not list the changes but marked in red in revised paper.

9.2 we appreciate Editors/Reviewers' warm work earnestly, and hope the correction will meet with approval.

10.1 once again, thank you very much for your comments and suggestions.

【可以将主要修改点在回答问题前列出】

list of actions:

LOA1: The revised manuscript is double spaced / marked in red / ...
LOA2: a paragraph has been added in page 5 to further explain the algorithm ...
LOA3: Explanations of the legned of Figure 3 have been added in page 7.
LOA4: Fig. 2 has been enlarged / changed / ...
LOA5: All typos have been removed.

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