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Because of development of technology and increase of wealth,life expectancy has been lengthening all the time.

Although the aged can contribute to society,but such a demographic change will cause a lot of problems.

One of these problems related to aging population is that medical costs will sharply increase,it will be a huge burden for taxpayers.

As we all know,most medical demands and costs appear in old ages.

Therefore,the government should pay more money on caring the ages,and other crucial services like education will face problem of insufficient funds.

With increase in the number of aged workers,slowing down of work pace will be another problem.

With age,people’s abilities of receiving information and coping with work demands usually weaken.

If the old delay retirement,they may have a impact on companies’ efficiency and profitability.

On the other hand,if many people delay retirement and lengthen their careers,their experiences and wisdom will be a enormous treasure to society.

Because of paying heavily attention to diet and exercise,people now can live a healthier and longer life.

The aged can impart their knowledge and skills to young people as a consultant.

For instance,some senior administrators will teach young people how to manage a company,and how to serve customers better.

In a word,sharply lengthening of lifetime has burdened many countries’ health care,it will also have a impact on output of labor.

It will have influence on economic development,though we can make most of wisdom of the old.

 

1.Because of development of technology and increase of wealth,life expectancy has been lengthened all the time.

 

1.People’s life expectancy has increased in many societies,possibly because of improvements in technology and the increase in personal wealth.

 

2.Although the old can contribute to society,such a change of population may cause a lot of problems.

 

2.Although senior citizens can contribute extraordinarily to society,i would argue that this demographic change can bring about some problems.

 

3.One of these problems related to aging of population is that medical costs will sharply increase,it will burden to taxpayers.

 

3.One problem associated with an ageing population is that health care costs will escalate,imposing a burden on taxpayers.

 

4.As we all know,most medical demands and costs appear in old ages.

 

4.It is widely known that most medical needs and costs occur in the last years of life.

 

5.Therefore,the government should pay more money in caring for the old,and other crucial services like education will face problem of insufficient funds.

 

5.Governments have to pour more money in caring for the elderly,but other essential services like education will be underfunded.

 

6.With increase in the number of older workers,there is another problem that pace of work may be slow down.

 

6.The slow pace of work is another problem,as the number of senior workers increases.

 

7.With age,people’s abilities of absorb information and cope with works weaken.

 

7.The ability to absorb information and complete work normally declines with age.

 

8.If the old delay retirement,maybe they will have a impact on companies’ efficiency and profitability.

 

8.If senior workers delay retirement,they may not perform as well as younger employees and this can influence companies’ productivity and profitability.

 

9.On the other hand,if many people delay retirement and prolong their career,their experiences and wisdom will be a enormous treasure to society.

 

9.On the other hand,many people will postpone retirement and extend their working life,and it is true that their experience and wisdom are a valuable asset to the whole society.

 

10.Nowadays,people live a healthier and longer life because they pay much attention to healthy diet and exercise.

 

10.People today can live healthier and longer,since they pay closer attention to healthy eating and sports.

 

11.They can impart their wisdom and skills to young people as a resultant.

 

11.They can work as consultants and impart their knowledge and skills to the younger generations.

 

12.For instance,some senior administrators will teach young people how to manage a company,and how to serve customers better.

 

12.For example,some senior managers can teach young people how to manage to company,and how to provide better services for clients.

 

13.In a word,a longer-living population has burdened many countries’ health care,and has a influence on output of labor.

 

13.In conclusion,the considerable extension of life expectancy has put strain on health care and made the workforce less productive.

 

14.It will have a influence on economic development,though we can completely make use of wisdom of the old.

 

14.It will influence the economic development of a country,although we can make good use of senior workers’ wisdom.