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今天的《分析模式》漫谈
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我们来看一个坏事变好事
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还是第一章
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原文这里现在有一句
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The model may use features
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that language
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that are not
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available in
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other languages
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那么在2004中译本
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就是机械工业出版社的翻译
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可能使用了一些
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该语言独有
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括号,其他语言不具备的特性,这可以的
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但是2020中译本这里
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人民邮电出版社的中译本这里
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另一个风险是
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和特定语言绑定
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因为这样模型
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就可以使用
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该语言独有的特性
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这听起来好像是好事
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你看,这样就可以什么什么
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这好像是很棒的意思
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这跟风险这里对不上
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你看,危险这里,为什么危险
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因为其他语言不具备这个特性
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这里说什么,有风险
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这样就可以
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这好像是好事
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而且这一句
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not available in
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other languages
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这里
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没有翻译出来
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原文只是阐述了一个事实,说这个特性
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其他语言没有
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如果你这样
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用编程语言建模的话
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就会有风险
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但是他并没有探究这个动机
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我为什么要用编程语言建模
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原文并没有这个内容
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至少在这一段里面并没有
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这个好像是探究它的动机
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我为什么我要用编程语言来建模
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因为这样就可以用该语言的特性
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好像为了找理由一样
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这里面不是要描述动机的
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是阐述说这样有什么危险
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这样的危险就是,你用的特性
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可能是其他语言不具备的
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所以2024中译本打算是这样译
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用编程语言建模
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还存在将模型
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与该语言绑定的危险
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模型可能使用该语言的某些特性
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而其他语言不具备这些特性
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这并不意味着概念模型
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无法迁移到另一语言
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但可能会使这个过程更加困难
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你看,这里说的都是不好,不好
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并不是像这个语气一样
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好像是好事一样
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这样就可以,不是这样的
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还有另外一个问题
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就是danger这个
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2004中译本
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这里翻译为危险,这是可以的
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但是2020中译本翻译成风险
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这个就不太合适
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会让人误以为原文是risk
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其他地方,比如说第三章这里也有risk
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risk
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而这里又译作风险
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也就是说,不管是danger还是risk,都译作风险
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这个就有点混淆了
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这样就让人感觉用词比较随意
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我再举一个例子
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比如说,我们看2020中译本
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还是刚才那句话
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你看这有个features
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这里翻译成特性
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这是对的,可以
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但是,还是同一章
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这里也有features
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这里又翻译成功能
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功能的话
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就会让人误以为原文是function
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像这种的话,还是要注意一下
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除非你有理由
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还有这里,实际上说的是制品和它的特性
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但是这里说是系统、功能
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如果说作者想说系统、功能
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他会用系统、功能
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system、function什么之类的
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他既然用了这个词
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我们就应该尽量去体现原文的含义
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关于什么特性跟功能有什么区别
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那是另外一个问题了