//2015年2月22日
1、什么是学术英语:(直指本质)
正常英语:四分之一名词,四分之一动词
Veterinary scientists are people who practice all around the world.A veterinary is a person who is like a doctor for animals.
They help animals who are sick and/or injured to recover.They also perform surgery on animals and when people bring them their house pets,they save the pets' lives sometimes.There also veterinarians who look after large animals like the ones from farms and even zoo animals.Veterinarians are specialists and have to go to school for a long time.They have to study a very lone time to be able to work as a veterinarian.In some Western countries they charge a lot of money and are able to become quite healthy.
学术英语:二分之一名词,10%动词
Veterinarian science is a practice around the world.A veterinarian assists animals from house pets to farm,zoo and even wild animals both as doctor and surgeon,and is a life saver at times.Veterinarians become qualified after a lengthy educational process and may acquire a comfortable level of wealth.
2、其他
a sufficient amount of evidence to support it =》sufficient supporting evidence
另外注意:
common academic nonus
evaluative adjectives
using adverbials for cohesion
essay verbs
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