写论文应该注意的（外国教授给中国学生总结的常见错误）

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写论文应该注意的

文章中的主要论点和支撑论点都是分开的，而不是长句

参数多的时候使用项目列表

Too long
The clear height of the case is 6.15 meters; the thickness of the roof is 0.85 meters; the thickness of the bottom is 0.90 meters, the overall width is 26.6 meters, the overall length of the axial cord is 304.5 meters, the length of the jacking section is about 148.8 meters; the weight of the case is about 24127 tons.3
Clear
• Case clearance height 6.15 meters
• Roof thickness 0.85 meters
• Bottom thickness 0.90 meters
• Overall width 26.6 meters
• Overall length of the axial cord 304.5 meters
• Length of the jacking section 148.8 meters (approx.)
• Weight of the case 24127 tons (approx.)

把目的、原因、位置放在后面，主要观点放在前面

ex1

Incorrect
For the application in automobile interiors, this paper studies the nesting optimization problem in leather manufacturing. 5
Correct
This paper studies the nesting optimization problem in leather manufacturing for application in automobile interiors.

ex2

Incorrect
Especially when numerical control (NC) techniques[4] are widely used in industry and rapid prototype methods[5][6] bring a huge economical benefits, the advantage of constructing 3D model[7][8][9] becomes extremely obvious.2
Correct
The advantage of constructing a 3D model[7][8][9] becomes extremely obvious especially when numerical control (NC) techniques[4] are widely used in industry and rapid prototype methods[5][6] bring a huge economical benefits.

ex3

Incorrect
Inside the test box, the space was filled with asbestos.15
Correct
The space inside the test box was filled with asbestos.

ex4

Incorrect
To ensure sheet metal quality as well as assembly quality, CMMs are widely used in automotive industry production.16
Correct
CMMs are widely used in automotive industry production to ensure sheet metal quality as well as assembly quality.

把条件放在后面

Incorrect
When U is taken as the control parameter, the BDs for ∆=0.0, 0.001, 0.005 are shown in Fig. 8.
Correct
Figure 8 shows the BDs for ∆=0.0, 0.001, and 0.005 when U is taken as the control parameter.

把根据放在后面

Incorrect
Based on the triangulation structure built from unorganized points or a CAD model, the extended STL format is described in this section.4
Correct
The extended STL format is described in this section based on the triangulation structure built from unorganized points or a CAD model.

Respectively的错误用法

首先需要明确的是：respectively强调的是两个事物或者人的先后顺序（按照之前所给定的列表，一一对应）

正确用法
Bobby, Nicole and Daren wore red, green and blue coats, respectively.
人与颜色一一对应，用对了！

respectively要放在名词后面

incorrect
Equations 2～6 can be respectively linearized as:……(equations given)…13
Correct
Equations 2～6 can be linearized as:……(equations given)…, respectively.
respectively不能放在所指名词前面

ex2

Incorrect
The weights of the two experts are respectively 0.600 and 0.400.19
Correct
The weights of the two experts are 0.600 and 0.400, respectively.

对于已经暗含了顺序的，不能再使用respectively

The value of x is 3.5, and that of y is 18.2, respectively.

没有一一对应关系，不能用respectively

Incorrect
The dynamic characteristics of a rotor with asymmetric stiffness or with initial warp have been studied before respectively [1-4]
Correct
The dynamic characteristics of a rotor with asymmetric stiffness or with initial warp have been studied before [1-4].

Incorrect
The inlet and outlet temperature of the air cooler were measured using two thermocouples respectively.17
Correct
The inlet and outlet temperature of the air cooler were measured by using two thermocouples.

`in this paper` 和`in this study`的错误使用与过度使用

首先明确，有两种情况可以使用：
- 在文章开头和结尾（introduction和conclusion部分）用以强调文章的内容，可以使用。
- 在文章的正文部分，在提到了其他人的工作之后或者提及了其他文章之后要阐述自己观点时，应使用。
- 综上，这两种表述在文章的使用不应该超过3次，因为读者显然知道文章是作者写的。

区别

in this paper和in this study是有细微的差别的：前者用以呈现自己的工作或者表示读者正在读的东西；后者是用来表示作者做过的工作。

不应该在开头使用阿拉伯数字或缩略语

Incorrect
12 parameters were selected for the experiment.
Correct
Twelve parameters were selected for the experiment.

阿拉伯数字应该表示量，而不是用作非学术用语

Incorrect
All 3 studies concluded that the mean temperature should be 30°C.
Correct
All three studies concluded that the mean temperature should be 30°C.