读《The Most Common Habits from more than 200 English Papers written by Graduate Chinese Engineering》

2011,最近在b站刷到的,然后csdn上好像2019年又有过其他人的整理(第一感受是文章的排版很神秘,不需要左右对齐吗?)

Section 1

“a, an, the”

article 冠词
(总的来看错误都是少用漏用冠词,那就是说非专有名词用就对了,至于定不定冠词看指代意义)
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超长句子

当作者真正想强调思想之间的关系时,应该使用分号。

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在一个句子的主要概念的前面,先说明目的、地点或原因

中国作家往往在一个句子的主题之前,首先陈述目的、地点、原因、例子和条件作为入门元素。然而,这样做的效果是降低了主要思想的重要性,并使读者认为作者是间接的。把主要思想带到句子的开头,然后陈述任何位置、原因等等。

(不是说不需要段首中心句的意思,而是说应当先给出句子的主干,然后状语补充啥的放在后面)
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放置表示句子开头时间的短语的倾向(Tendency of placing phrases which indicate time at the beginning of a sentence)

(和前一种类似,也是应当把状语放在后面)
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把最重要的主题放在句子的开头以强调

(同上,突出强调)
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“which/ that”

(主要是非限定性定语从句不要乱用)
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‘Respectively’ and ‘respective’

错放到所指名词前

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分别插入来表示某事的顺序。然而,顺序已经在句子的其他地方暗示了,或者不需要表达,因为它没有增加句子的意义的价值。

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不清楚“分别”指的是什么

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‘In this paper’, ‘in this study’

容易过度使用
真正该用的地方:

  1. 在引言和结论中强调了论文的内容
  2. 在论文正文中,引用作者未完成的工作,如其他期刊文章或标准(?)

如果任何一个短语在一篇论文中出现超过三次,它的使用是值得怀疑的。实际上,读者知道所呈现的作品是由作者写的(除非作者另有说明),所以没有理由重复这些短语。

以及这俩短语用错,更该用的是In this study
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“研究”是作者所做的工作。论文是呈现这部作品的方式,也是读者所持有/阅读的内容。

不过也可以用 ‘in this research’和‘this paper present’.

Numbers and Equations

阿拉伯数字不应该在句子的开头使用。
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此外,阿拉伯数字也被过度使用了。阿拉伯数字应用于在技术论文中提供数据,但不应用于提供一般资料。
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以及在句中用单词表示优于用公式简化
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Format

分段后缩进(这个还是看投稿要求吧)
图表标识

表一般就是Table不缩写,图的各种写法 Figure, figure, Fig, or fig不要混着用,在句子的开头也不使用缩写,在单词/缩写和数字之间有一个空格。

变量

斜体

‘such as’ and ‘etc.’

主要是别杂糅着用
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‘such as’ 意味着将给出不完整的列表,在给出完整列表时不应该使用
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Section 2

有些单词具有相同的单数和复数形式,不需要加上s就可以成为复数。这些词包括:

• literature (指代研究文献)
• equipment
• staff (指代一群工作人员整体)
• faculty(?学院?)

短语类型的冗余

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某些词要求他们修饰的名词是复数的。这些词包括不同的、不同的和数字的词。

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不要‘by this way’而是‘by doing this’, or ‘using this method’

句首不要‘How to…’

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用‘the results are shown in Figure 2’矫正‘the results are showed as Figure 2’

少用‘obviously’

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国际上投稿就别再用 ‘at home’, ‘abroad’, ‘here’, ‘our country’ 这些了

别用‘that is to say’ and ‘namely’而是解释出来

不要用‘too’表示‘也’

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(总的来说想象中的很牛的技巧不多,更多的还是陈述一些语感,甚至还有重复的条目。感觉不如复习高中英语😂)

另外听了一个课
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Shifts in China’s Rural and Urban Population: 2000-2020 The bar chart clearly reveals that from 2000 to 2020, while the total population in China increased moderately from 1.25 billion to 1.41 billion, population in urban and rural areas experienced dramatic shifts in different directions. Urban population rose from 450 million in 2000 to 670 million in 2010 and 900 million in 2020; contrastingly, rural population declined from 800 million in 2000 to 680 million in 2010 and 510 million in 2020. The population gap narrowed largely because of the joint effects of urbanization, unequal economic opportunities in rural and urban areas, and the expansion of higher education. In the first place, there was a large-scale urban sprawl during this period. Places which had been part of the vast countryside were incorporated into cities, causing hundreds of millions of rural dwellers to be passively transformed into urban residents. What’s more, while urban living standards improved greatly in these years, few economic opportunities fell on rural areas and most peasant families remained at the poverty line. Poverty prompted the call for change, leading a large quantity of healthy young peasants to leave their hometowns and flock to cities for a better living. Last but not least, China’s higher education grew at an unprecedented rate in these years. More high school graduates than ever before entered colleges and universities, most of whom preferred to stay in urban areas after graduation for personal development. The increase in urban population was a sure indication of economic and educational achievements in China. It benefited the country in many aspects, relieving the shortage of labor force in cities, lessening the burden of peasants to support their families, and affording young people from rural areas more opportunities to display their talents. However, the migration of rural residents into urban areas inevitably brought about disadvantages. Some of them, such as waste of arable land and left-behind children in the countryside, as well as traffic congestion and soaring housing prices in cities, have already called the attention of the government and corresponding measures have begun to take effect. But others, especially the inability of many peasants to integrate into urban life due to their lack of education and civilized habits, have long been neglected. In this sense, we cannot be satisfied with the superficially optimistic figures in the chart, but should endeavor to foster the integration of these newcomers by providing them with adequate assistance in educational and cultural aspects, so that they can find easier access to the prosperity and convenience of urban life and be more fully devoted to the development of cities.翻译成英文版两百单词左右的文章
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The bar chart shows that from 2000 to 2020, while China's total population increased slightly from 1.25 billion to 1.41 billion, the population in urban and rural areas changed significantly. The urban population increased from 450 million in 2000 to 670 million in 2010 and 900 million in 2020, while the rural population decreased from 800 million in 2000 to 680 million in 2010 and 510 million in 2020.The population shift was largely caused by urbanization, unequal economic opportunities in urban and rural areas, and the expansion of higher education. Urban sprawl led to millions of people from rural areas becoming urban residents. In addition, living standards in cities improved at a faster rate than in rural areas, leading many people to migrate in search of better economic opportunities. Finally, the number of people entering universities and colleges increased dramatically, and most of them chose to stay in the cities after graduating.The increase in urban population was a sign of economic and educational progress in China, with multiple benefits such as an increased labor force in cities, less burden on rural families, and greater opportunities for young people from rural areas. However, it also brought some negative consequences, such as the loss of arable land, the abandonment of children in rural areas, traffic jams and skyrocketing housing prices. The government has taken action to address these issues, but the lack of education and poor living habits of many people from rural areas has often been overlooked.Therefore, we cannot be satisfied with the optimistic figures in the chart, but must work to ensure that those who migrate from rural to urban areas are properly integrated into city life. This can be achieved through providing educational and cultural assistance, so that they can take advantage of the convenience and prosperity of urban life and contribute to the development of cities.

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