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亚洲是最大的洲，在地理上变化最多，其地貌包括巨大的，由沙漠覆盖着的高原，也包括像喜马拉雅这样的高山，而喜马拉雅山上的珠穆朗玛峰是世界上最高的山峰。
Asia is the largest continent with various of geography. It concludes huge desert-covered plateaus, high mountains like Himalaya. Mount Qomolangma of Himalaya is the highest mountain in the world.
一、搭配问题。various of geography 像这种 形容词+可数名词，不加冠词就要将可数名词改问复数，另外various是形容词，可以说various geographies 不能加介词of，短语搭配是a variety of。
此外，【地理上变化最多】最好用geography features,表示地理特征很多样。
various of geography --> a variety of geography features
二、喜马拉雅山脉是一个地名，通常需要使用定冠词“the”。
三、【喜马拉雅山上的珠穆朗玛峰】，用介词in，不是of , Mount Qomolangma in the Himalaya
四、文段结构复杂，可以考虑拆分，但是如何能够统一成一句，用正确的句式结构，可以提高写作水平。
Asia, the largest continent, is the most geographically diverse, with its landforms including large desert-covered plateaus and such high mountains as the Himalayas, where Mount Qomolangma is the tallest in the world.
第一句使用插入语表述了【最大的洲】，之后用with引导状语从句具体描述了复杂地貌，且用非限定性定语从句【where Mount...】描述了珠穆拉玛峰是最高山峰这个事实。
太平洋几乎和其他三个大洋加起来一样大，其最深部分达到海面下10，973米，这个深度甚至超过了喜马拉雅山上世界最高峰的高度。
The Pecific, almost as big as the sum in area of the other oceans, can reach 10，973 meters indeapest underwater, which can surpass the height of the highest mount in the Himalaya.
一、拼写错误：Pecific-->Pacific
二、搭配错误： the sum of 表示...的总和；the sum of the areas of the other oceans.
三、将【几乎和其他三个大洋加起来一样】做同位语，将【最深部分达到海面下10，973米】有点儿弄混了句子的重心。句子重心是【几乎和其他三个大洋加起来一样】这个事实，其他都是围绕这个事实的阐释，所以最好将后面部分做成状语，表伴随。
The Pacific Ocean, is almost as large as the other three combined, its deepest part being 10,973 m below sea level- a distance even greater than the height of Earth's tallest peak in the Himalayas.
一、非限定性定语combined，将【加起来总和】表达出来，非常简洁。
二、独立主格结构 ：名词/代词+非谓语动词 ；将跟主语紧密相连，且内容相对独立的后半句单独表述出来【its deepest part being】
三、使用破折号，插入一个名词短语，进一步解释说明10937米大概有多少米。
四、注意由于是【深度】和【高度】比，所以并不适合直接用heighest，用表示距离的distance较为准确。
所谓岛屿，就是一块四面环水的陆地，地球上有无数的岛屿，从最大的格陵兰到只有几米宽的小点块陆地不等。中国的两个最大岛屿是台湾和海南。
An island is a land surrounded by water. From the largest island in Greenland to numerous meters-wide land, there are countless islands on earth, Taiwan and Hainan are the two largest islands in China.
一、【四面环水】准确的表达要使用completed surrounded by water，才能够把【四面】这个含义表达出来。
二、【最大的格陵兰】不要使用【he largest island in Greenland】 这样就表述成了格陵兰当中最大的岛屿，这就属于错误翻译。也不要用the largest island of Greenland,这就好像在说还有一个小的格陵兰岛，最好用非限定性定语表述【最大的】，这层含义。
An island is a piece of land completely surrounded by water. The earth has countless islands, ranging from Greenland, the largest one, to tiny spots of land that are only a few meters wide. China's two largest islands are Taiwan and Hainan.
一、land是不可数名词，表示一块陆地可以使用 a piece of sth.
二、【几米宽的小点块】== tiny spots of land that are only a few meters wide.
全球性的气候变迁，主要见于地球大气的逐渐变暖，现正受到全世界的注意，因为这种变迁会对世界人民的生活产生巨大的影响。
The global climate change, mainly shown as being warmer in atmosphere, attricts many attentions worldwide for its huge impact on people's life
一、attricts-->attracts; people's life-->people' lives
二、【见于】表示【...显现为...】manifesting,seen；【大气逐渐变暖】warmer temperatures in the atmosphere 【因为】 due to
The global climate change, mainly manifesting as warmer temperatures in the atmosphere, attracts a lot of attention worldwide due to its huge impact on people's lives.
长江是中国最长的河流，长江上的三峡发电厂是一项正在进行中的十分巨大的工程，该厂所要用的发电机将是世界上最大的机组。
The Yangtze River is the longest one in China. Three Gorges power plant of it is a huge project under construction, and its power generators will be the biggest in the world.
一、【最长河流】the longest river in China 不要使用the longest one in China，表达模糊也是错误表达的一个方面。
二、【长江上】用 on it 不要使用of it，不是归属关系，而是位置关系。
The Yangtze is the longest river in China. Its Three Gorges Power Station is a gigantic project under construction; the generators the station will use will be the largest in the world.
一、三峡大电厂 专有名词需要背诵：Three Gorges Power Station
二、巨大工程 gigantic project
三、 词汇辨析 large, big
largest：描述有形物体的大小
biggest：不仅可以用来描述有形物体的大小，更多时候是用来形容无形事物的巨大程度或者影响力，强调事物的重要性、影响力等无形属性时，则更为常用。
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